Your Eyes via gkkmouse
Speaking to Bella while she lay unconscious in bed was a familiar position for me to be in; it calmed me, too. Only this time the love of my life just happened to not be sleeping peacefully but rather dying in my arms only to wake as a vampire, as the vampire I had created.
When I saw her begin to stir, my entire world snapped into focus, as I tried to anticipate what she would say, what she would need. I whispered her name and her head whipped to me, her eyes searching for a moment to steady on my face. Her face softened: relief, love, need, and calm washed over her features. I wanted to pounce on her, to jump on the bed in joy but needed to remain quiet for her. I studied her face and then our eyes met; for a long moment, I was lost in her warm, familiar gaze.
"Oh my God, Bella…your eyes.” I said, staring at her luminous eyes, shining over her joy at seeing my face next to her.
Bella had become so unbearably breathtaking I couldn’t stop staring at her. She was clearly destined to become a vampire and I had almost thwarted Fate’s plans for her by resisting.
“They are still brown…maybe some burgundy? Bella, look at me.” Even knowing her confusion, I could not stop smiling. I wanted to pull her down on top of me, to crash my lips against her full rosebud pout, feel her soft tongue against mine, and feel her moaning in my throat. My hands touched either side of her face. A bolt of energy passed through my skin and within a millisecond she was frozen against the wall on the far end of the room.
Fucking Stunning
"'Oh my God. Bella, you're...fucking stunning.' I swore unconsciously at the sight of her, I stood up slowly from where I had been tangled in the sheets.
Her body was slim, her frame petite, but her muscles were toned and feminine. Her breasts were firm and round, her delicious abdomen was still flat, but stronger. Her waist was narrow and led into her softly curved hips. The body was Bella's but exponentially more, exponentially more sexy, more fluid. I could have stared at her legs for days; her thighs were thin and defined, her hamstrings made for running and for the thousands of short sirts I would now insist on buying her. Her smooth calves drew my eyes to her small delicate feet. Of course, she looked delicate, but I knew otherwise. But it was her pale lustrous skin that stole the air from my cold lungs. Her skin was flawless; cream over silk. I longed to run my fingers over her skin for hours, pressing my lips to her thighs, her stomach, her neck."
Hungry
"My mouth met hers hungrily, my hands feverishly grabbing her body: her soft hips, her firm breasts. But then, grabbing her shoulders, gently urging her off of me. Her hands in my hair were hard. 'Bella, slow down. Bella...' I said gently, my lips dropping soft kisses on her lips to take the sting out of my words. She looked at my face closely, and realized that I was trying not to grimace; she was hurting me. She loosened her grip on my hair and tried to move away from me in what appeared to be intended as a small movement but she found herself again against the wass where she stood rigid, over-stimulated. Her face was devastated.
The speed of the movements was hardly unexpected but I could tell that she was bewildered and mortified that she hurt me. I didn't know what to say to calm her. I sat up on the bed. 'It's okay, Bella. I'm okay. Please come back to me.' My face distressed, my hands motioning for her.
'I don't know how to drive this thing.' She tried to joke, but the fear in her voice came through easily. 'You know I would be the one vampire in history to be clumsy.'...
...'Bella, love do you feel thirsty?' My voice was quiet, too.
She considered the question. 'My throat itches but I figured it was just for my need for you, Edward. I don't have any context; don't know what drinking will feel like.' She tucked her hair behind her ear, a remnant of a human habit. 'I don't know. God this is so weird. I kind of expected to wake up and we'd smile and look at how different I look and then make love and then I'd go grab a wolf and then sunbathe on the boat.'"
I Can't Touch You via gkkmouse
"'Oh God Edward!' She was wrecked with need, too. 'I can't touch you. I feel totally out of control. This is torture. She put her hands over her face, seeming to expect tears before remembering there would be none.
'Bella, this is normal. You have new speed, new strength, and new sensations. It doesn't help that we're well, madly in love and insatiable.' I smiled her favorite smile, trying to be reassuring, distracted by the trace sensation of her wet flesh on me.
'Normal.' She scoffed. 'I crashed you into a wall.'
'You're hardly the first vampire in history to do that. I can't tell you how many walls we fixed with Rose and Emmett.' I chuckled. 'Besides, I don't think it's a coordination issue, I think it's passion. Let's get you fed, sweet girl. It might take the edge off, and even if it doesn't, it will give you time to settle into your new body.' I tried to take the lust out of my voice and knew that I failed when I realized I was staring at her lips...
...Her instincts were strong; she stilled at the clearing, watching two does grazing. I stood back, letter her figure out how to approach them. In an instant she sprinted across the field and lunged at the larger animal, draining it quickly before chasing after the second one. I followed her slowly, giving her distance. She returned to me, her clothing rumpled, the leaves in her hair doing nothing to still my raging lust for her...
...'Satisfied? Not hardly.' She said, with a flirty smirk on her face, and I know she wasn't referring to the deer. 'It was...hot...grass, dirt...but kind of delicate, actually. It was fine.' She smiled and shrugged, her insecurity about her word choice was adorable."
I Need This via anntastic23
"I couldn't take it anymore; I pulled her into my arms, tangling my hands roughly in her hair, feeling her scalp beneath my fingers, her body strong enough to handle my hands pulling her hair. 'Bella I need you now.'
Her hands hung limply at her side and she stood frozen against me but her expressive eyes communicated silently to me. I turned her face to mine and kissed her softly, letting my lips press against hers slowly. I licked her lips softly, whispering her name. Her hands did not touch me, her body remained stiff but she did not pull away. 'Do you want me to stop?' I whispered softly.
She shook her heard quickly, 'No, never. I'm just terrified of hurting you.'
'Shhh, darling. You won't.' I kissed her lips again, pushing them open with my tongue, urging her to let me in. A soft moan escaped her lips. 'That's it darling, just let me kiss you...' I kissed her top lip then took her bottom lip into my mouth, nibbling it for the first time with my teeth. She moaned loudly, whipping her arms behind her back to restrain herself. 'Touch me, Bella, please.' I begged. She cried my name but did not move her arms.
I moved my lips to her jaw, kissing down her neck, licking her soft skin, kissing the spot where my teeth had sunk into her, where she wore two small cresent scars that would always remind me of the night I had changed her. But in this moment I thought of it as the last time I had been inside her, the last time I felt her arms around me, easy with me. I knew she just needed time to learn to control her strength, but each day since we had first made love my love for her grew, and each day I grew more insatiable. The days of her stillness, of her silence while I waited in agony for her to return to me only exacerbated my need. My mouth moved hungrily over her skin, nipping at it now, sucking it hard into my mouth. She did not stop me; I could not stop myself....
...I reached above her head and took one of her hands. She resisted initially, but then related, willing to watch what i had planned . I wrapped her arm around my torso, compromising, leaving the other arm bent beside her head. 'Just hold me, please, Bella...' I whispered in her ear. I reached down and rubbed myself against her entrance, moaning loudly before pushing into her. My movement was gentle as it had been when she was human: habit lingered. I felt resistance by her body and her breath caught in her throat. I looked down at her, 'Bella, does it hurt?' Realization dawned on me; of course her hyman would regenerate. She would be entirely restored. She shook her head below me, licking her lips watching my mouth.
'No, it just feels tight.' She whispered.
I groaned. It did indeed. I pushed farther into her, the realization that she would be an eternal virgin when we made love almost pushed me to climax once I fel the entire length of my body inside her....
...I lay inside her, raising my body and resting on my elbows above her, one arm on either side of ther head. I kissed her softly, letting my lips explore hers, kissing her cheeks, her nose, her chin, her eyelids. Her flesh felt so different against mine, it was new and familiar simultaneously, and the sensation was heady. She kissed me back softly, her lips becoming more bold in their movements, her head pushing up to meet my mouth. Our kisses became more intense and when I felt her hands softly touch my face I felt myself stiffen inside her, her breath coming out in a sigh in my mouth at the sensation. Her hands gently stayed on my face, not moving but mercifully not leaving either. I was content with this amount of progress while I made love to my wife again and again"
Review by ECullentitis:
"That she screamed and did not know it... I loved that, and the absolute affect he (his voice) had on her, even unconsciously.
"her beauty made me mute." - Ah, perfection! *swoon*
“I don’t know how to drive this thing.” She tried to joke, but the fear in her voice came through easily. “You know I would be the one vampire in history to be clumsy.”
- LOVED this. Absolutely LOVED IT.
I am so very happy that you had her hunt instinctively on her own for the first time. I like when it's drawn out and awkward for her too, but this was such a refreshing alternative! Plus, it SHOULD be instinctive, they are designed for it, after all.
Her refusing to touch him and him begging for it... yes, it was angsty but so very tender and sweet and so very Bella. You did a really good job of her characterization here.
READING ON!!
XOXO
~JO~"
Great quote via SandytheSandstorm:
"I don't know how to drive this thing."... "You know I would be the one vampire in history to be clumsy."
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